Sorting Alone [Open!]

[ShadowDeeD]

Snowpaw was now lost.This wasn't his behaviour,something must've took over.It was probably a bad day or bad luck."Sorry,I was taken over,lost."He bowed his head down with respect."If that's what it will be then I am good with it.My training will stop."He lied down on the ground and looked at the medicine cat go away.He sighed thinking of what will happen next.This was truly blow that hurt much.Even thought for such small period he could learn much but,he is now stopped from learning anything.As he was lieing down a little bit of dust came into his wound.Making it burn even more.'Ouch...this burns alot.I hope it helps me.'He thought in himself,trying to convince him it will help.This kind it will only hurt and not help.But then he remembered what he said.'Well you are medicine cat,whatever you say is good.'

He just lied down there,waiting for next command of his mentor,hoping it would be a good one.And hoping he wouldn't have to take that herb.It would be just easier to calm down.He meowed and just looked to the she-cat's den and awaited.

Word Count;;241
Muse;;Dunno...
Tags;;Brokenfang

[Spottedshadow]

Darksky turned back, never actually entering her den. "That's better," she meowed with approval. "Now, if you continue to behave like this, you'll be ready to train by sunhigh tomorrow." Darksky looked at the two cats in front of her. Warrior and apprentice. The two would have a bond that would last for a very long time. Darksky was envious of that. Her mentor was dead. Spottednose had been killed on the Thunderpath on the way to a gathering. Darksky remained in camp and tried to save her, but she was unable to do so. Her mentors wounds had been too great. Before she died, she gave Darksky her full medicine name and told her to travel to the Moonpool without her to receive her status. Darksky reluctantly agreed, she couldn't very well deny her mentors last request.

Shaking her head, Darksky cleared her thoughts of those painful memories. She looked back at Brokenfang, and waited for him to say something, either to her or his apprentice.

Word Count;; 192
Muse;; Okay, I guess..
Tags;; Snowpaw, Brokenfang

[Seali]

It was clear that Snowpaw was hurt in more than one place. Brokenfang sighed, his eye cast downwards. There's more than one way to train you know. It's about listening and seeing, as well as doing." He sat down, curling his tail over his paws. "I should know- I was stuck in this den for a whole moon during my apprenticeship." The large tom lifted his gaze to glance at one corner of the den. That was where he had resigned, and watched the world go by- no one bothered him, with the exeption of Soottednose, who had occasionally stopped by with a poultice of sorts. It almost seemed as if he had learned more in that moon than he had throughout the rest of his apprenticeship. For one thing, he learned that losing an eye cost you the respect of others. He had also learned of most of the herbs in the den, though all that inofrmation was gone now. His mentor would sometimes stop by to talk to the medicine Cat- not him, mind you, about how he was feeling. Yes, that was the moon in which he had grown distant fom the rest of the world. A cocoon of soorow had wrapped around him, but the butterfly hadn't come out yet. 'Enough with the metaphors, already!'

"For example, I'm sure you could learn a lot by watching Darksky treat patients." 'For a bonus, you could remember it all.' He had no clue how the Medicine cat kept everything in her head.

Muse- It was rushed, since Shadow had to go soon and... never mind.
Tags- Darksky, Snowpaw
Words- 268

[ShadowDeeD]

"As you say."He said respectfully and with gratitude.He was lucky that atleast he had someone to talk in here.Next words that came out of his mentors mouths were shocking to Snowpaw.He couldn't even stand without every day training.It would make him go crazy.He covered it up with silence.Truly he did admired him always but this was something special to him.His look was now on a corner of the den,so he know that was where he was staying and it probably bringed up some memories."Well I might learn some herb names...or something more."He wasn't really intrested into medicine but,he liked it becouse it helps cats.This was a new cat,he never saw her before in the den.But neither did he go to medicine den much but his menotor did.Probably becouse of the scar on his eye,Snowpaw has one too but he doesn't go there alot.How come that he always visits it so much?

Snowpaw was young and probably wouldn't understand much,so he did not understand his mentor that well but,he did know him.By the pulled muscle he had gotten a cut too.Some bit of dust got into his cut and it did burn he could say."May I lie down where there is no dust on the ground?"He asked polite this medicine cat.[/size]


Words count;;255
Muse;;Good!
Tags:None...?

[Spottedshadow]

Darksky sniffed the air. It smelled greatly of rain. Good, just what the forest needs, she thought. Those bloody Thunderclan warriors would start hunting on our territory any day if their precious undergrowth died... She had to force her fur not to bristle as she thought of prey stealers. As a medicine cat, Darksky was above the quarrels among the clan warriors, but she still had a grudge against prey stealers. Rightfully so, she thought to herself.

"Well, I might learn some herb names... Or something more,"

[/i] Snowpaw meowed. "May I lie down where there is no dust on the ground?"[/i][/center]

Darksky let out a purr of amusement. "You don't have to stay in the Medicine Den, you are free to sleep with your fellow apprentices," she informed the apprentice. For some strange reason, it appeared that what Brokenfang said frightened the apprentice, and now Snowpaw thought he had to stay in the Den. He would only get in the way, as his injuries aren't terribly great, he'd be restless by sunset, and under my paws by moonhigh...[/color][/blockquote]

Word Count;; 237
Muse;; Pretty darn good, but it's been better...
Notes;; Shadow, "Tags" are for the characters that you mention in your post!
Tags;; Snowpaw, Brokenfang[/size]